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Having received some excellent advice about avoiding too much sky in my photo, which is reportedly a tempting error to make, I submit the above revision to my previous photo named "Still Flowing." I must confess the advice to cut out a quadrant of sky does appear to me to produce a positive effect. Although the above composition is cut in halves by the major components of sky and water, I dare think it still works. As for my tendency to include too much sky, I can only assume it springs from an inborn desire to be as free as a bird.