Hi all, I have posted a remake of one of my first pictures:
Sunny Day (remake).
I still believe that the idea behind is good, but I recognize that there is a lot of room for improvement.
If you have the time to have a look, I would like some honest critiques and suggestions. Thanks in advance,
Rob
P.S. For comparison, the older posting is Sunny Day.
for ME .. the lack of dappled sunlight perking up the flat lighting .. AND .. the brickwall, in general, are preventing the concept from working
I would experiment with removing the 'sun' from the wall and seeking out a more flexible environment .. as the wall is a little 'too' man-made and a definite depth-of-field killer .. find a tree to hang the sun ... AND .. in a perfect world, I would replace the sun with a 'greenman' face, and change the concept from sunny day (since you lack sun where you live) to a man of the woods, nature sprite concept .. employing a lot of greens, shadows, and dappled light
Sunny Day (remake).
I still believe that the idea behind is good, but I recognize that there is a lot of room for improvement.
If you have the time to have a look, I would like some honest critiques and suggestions. Thanks in advance,
Rob
P.S. For comparison, the older posting is Sunny Day.