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Sunny Day (remake)

::rob2001
07/22/07 8:10 PM GMT
Hi all, I have posted a remake of one of my first pictures:
Sunny Day (remake).
I still believe that the idea behind is good, but I recognize that there is a lot of room for improvement.
If you have the time to have a look, I would like some honest critiques and suggestions. Thanks in advance,
Rob
P.S. For comparison, the older posting is Sunny Day.
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.purmusic
07/22/07 8:36 PM GMT
Done. :o)
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"Sometimes me think what is love, and then me think love is what last cookie is for. Me give up the last cookie for you." - Cookie Monster
&KEIFER
07/22/07 11:16 PM GMT
for ME .. the lack of dappled sunlight perking up the flat lighting .. AND .. the brickwall, in general, are preventing the concept from working

I would experiment with removing the 'sun' from the wall and seeking out a more flexible environment .. as the wall is a little 'too' man-made and a definite depth-of-field killer .. find a tree to hang the sun ... AND .. in a perfect world, I would replace the sun with a 'greenman' face, and change the concept from sunny day (since you lack sun where you live) to a man of the woods, nature sprite concept .. employing a lot of greens, shadows, and dappled light
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