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I agree about the frame. It is a wonderful picture and the colours really glow. A slight Gamma adjustment perhaps would intensify the luminosity and seems to make the 'eyes' float/
I agree about the frame. It is a wonderful picture and the colours really glow. A slight Gamma adjustment perhaps would intensify the luminosity and seems to make the 'eyes' float/
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the only thing i can see is the odd black border at least at the top. hope this helps. jen
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sorry if i don't comment on each of your pictures. to those of you who comment so often, i can't imagine how you get it done!
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first and foremost, this is a great shot, Gem.
as you requested, here's some critical input.
the black border, I'm guessing, was intended to lend a "filmstrip" feel, and I like it, actually. I can only find two points to work on.
the first might be beyond your control. that's the bird's chest feathers..the focus on them is a bit soft. try unsharp mask, but the showytail feathers are nice and sharp, so perhaps the DOF needs to be corrected in future shots with a slightly tighter f-stop for greater depth.
The other thing is the lighting. try lowering the gamma levels just a bit. I'd recommend reducing the cyan channel for starters.
as you requested, here's some critical input.
the black border, I'm guessing, was intended to lend a "filmstrip" feel, and I like it, actually. I can only find two points to work on.
the first might be beyond your control. that's the bird's chest feathers..the focus on them is a bit soft. try unsharp mask, but the showytail feathers are nice and sharp, so perhaps the DOF needs to be corrected in future shots with a slightly tighter f-stop for greater depth.
The other thing is the lighting. try lowering the gamma levels just a bit. I'd recommend reducing the cyan channel for starters.
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it is a great shot .. the quintessential arrangement of peacock colored pixels
.. a few nitpicks
focus\sharpness: .. as Rob said, but I feel the tail feathers could also use some attention .. be careful, though .. too much and those 'fibers' will amplify
horizon: .. :o) .. the image tilts to the right .. and I need to fight the urge to yell: "Rogue Wave!" and grab the bird to keep it from being tossed about on the high seas
.. a few nitpicks
focus\sharpness: .. as Rob said, but I feel the tail feathers could also use some attention .. be careful, though .. too much and those 'fibers' will amplify
horizon: .. :o) .. the image tilts to the right .. and I need to fight the urge to yell: "Rogue Wave!" and grab the bird to keep it from being tossed about on the high seas
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Thanks guys ^_^ I thought it was a little off, I maybe should have spent a little more time but my mum wanted me to upload it to see what everyone thought... trust my mum.
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Thanks guys, love to all xx