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.third_eye
10/20/07 3:15 PM GMT
Apart from the widely varied tastes of the site, since these scored sort of low, I was wondering if someone wouldn't mind helping me see through different eyes. Any pointers, preferences, etc? Thanks in advance.


Blazing Puddle

dappled curve

Whitehall Street Pier, Version2.1
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::Shewolfe
10/20/07 7:26 PM GMT
Well..Blazing Puddle does have wonderful colours but it's a dirty puddle..there is a lot of muck and such that I think brings it down.

I really like Dappled Curve :)
Sometimes images jsut get a lower index for who knows what reasons.
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.third_eye
10/20/07 10:54 PM GMT
Hmmm, well ok. Thanks Bonnie.

anyone else?
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+mayne
10/21/07 4:00 AM GMT
Hmmmm, well ok. This message thanks to the Big Rock Brewery. Hey Rob, staring aT bLAZING pUDDLE. It looks like it has some heavy manipulation. I can't really focus on a subject as my eyes wander around the image. Dappled Curve is good but I think needs color. I like the perspective. Whitehall is a good B/W with nice contrast.
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.third_eye
10/21/07 4:02 AM GMT
Interesting input on all three counts. Thanks,Darryl.
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.noahnott
10/21/07 7:08 AM GMT
Hey, you said "critical comment[s]"...Who better to answer than me (don't answer it)!?

Blazing Poodle: The posterization kills the image. I'd suggest avoiding stuff like that - use the gamut warning in photoshop (it's for printing, but I still use it anyways). I really think color is not the way to go - either muted colors with a few colors shifts or B&W or just normal colors....anything other than posterization will be better.

Dappled Curve: My previous comment was kindof harsh...so...I'll leave it blank for now.

Pier V2: Looks good. I think there is quite a bit of empty space...doesn't bother me though. I do think it lacks 'depth' though...but that doesn't really bother much much either. It's good; I can't really suggest anything.
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.noahnott
10/21/07 7:17 AM GMT
I just looked at your gallery, and...the one with the bird is really nice. Like, I love the colors in that photo...nice creamy background too.

...much better than posterization. =P
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.third_eye
10/21/07 12:09 AM GMT
Actually, Noah, yours were the type of comments I was seeking.* When I post something it's because I'm proud of it, I enjoy it, and I feel it's the best I can make it. That's not to say I don't miss a detail here and there, or misjudge the level of reception an image will receive. So that's why I started this thread, to see what I missed.

So thank you. Sincerely.


*Did I really just say that? Wow ;-)
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+ppigeon
10/29/07 9:33 AM GMT
I commented the 3 works...
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-Pierre-
::third_eye
10/29/07 8:55 PM GMT
Thanks, Pierre. Much obliged.
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