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I like the line "irony of peace." that would ba a good title
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Angelle
"because reality isn't nearly as fun."
"Crying (1)in/(2)from the Shadows."
"Tears (1)in/(2)from the Shadows."
"Forgotten and Lost."
"Hurting in the Shadows."
"Small voices, Big tears."
"Small Voices."
"Requiem for the (1)lost/(2)forgotten children."
"Innocent."
And Ruby's suggested title would be the strongest, in my opinion, thus far.
Powerful song and lyrical content Bethany. Well done from me. :o)
"Tears (1)in/(2)from the Shadows."
"Forgotten and Lost."
"Hurting in the Shadows."
"Small voices, Big tears."
"Small Voices."
"Requiem for the (1)lost/(2)forgotten children."
"Innocent."
And Ruby's suggested title would be the strongest, in my opinion, thus far.
Powerful song and lyrical content Bethany. Well done from me. :o)
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"Think what a better world it would be if we all, the whole world, had cookies and milk about three o'clock every afternoon and then lay down on our blankets for a nap." - Robert Fulghum
"Who'll Cry for the Child"
"Cry for the Child"
"For the Child"
"Little One"
Love to hear it, Bethany...
- Mike
"Cry for the Child"
"For the Child"
"Little One"
Love to hear it, Bethany...
- Mike
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Thanks for the suggestions everyone :) They definitely help.
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For wisdom is protection just as money is protection. But the advantage of knowledge is that wisdom preserves the lives of its possessors.
Actually like Ruby's the best.
Or: "Look where all this talking's got us..."
('cause we all talk about peace, but few take action as you have done with this song to make a difference)
And I agree, I'd like to hear it!
Or: "Look where all this talking's got us..."
('cause we all talk about peace, but few take action as you have done with this song to make a difference)
And I agree, I'd like to hear it!
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"'Life is not a journey to the grave with the
intention of arriving safely in a pretty
and well preserved body,
but rather to skid in broadside,
thoroughly used up,
totally worn out,
and loudly proclaiming,
"WOW! What a ride!"'
As for some backgroud into the song, I was inspired by the current food shortage crisis going on in Haiti. For more info, go to the Misson Network News site
Here are the lyrics:
(Intro-instrumental)
(v.1)
Oh, the irony of peace is
That for it there is war
History repeats
And peace comes by the sword
Knights and kings have fought them
And soldiers armed in ranks
But who'll cry for the child
Left on the bloody banks
(chorus)
These repetitious words
Keep playing in my mind
That all we've left
Is wasted time
These repetitious words
Keep reeling in my head
That all we've got
Are hearts made of lead
(v.2)
Oh, the irony of hate is
That you can't comprehend
The amount of pain you feel
Oh, once you get revenge
Gangs and mobs have done it
And policemen armed in ranks
But who'll cry for the child
Buried on the banks
(Bridge-instrumental)
(Outro)
Stand up and FIGHT---
For the helpless child
Who can't fight for himself
Stand up and fight
Before the innocent
Are left beyond our help
....
These repetitious words
Keep playing in my mind
That all we've left
Is a little bit of time...