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Tropical Seascape

::marcaribe
05/28/08 10:21 PM GMT
What is wrong with my "Tropical Seascape" Is it cockeyed? Is the white rail in the front ruining it. I am not sure why it is so bad..I rather liked it. Please feel free to tell me why you think it's a flop. Helpful , informative advice and critiques are very welcome! Just as long as the word "Nice" is never used...Smile

Thanks for looking!
Sorry I don't have a direct link..not sure how to make one
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::third_eye
05/28/08 10:47 PM GMT
It's not a flop, Diane, but it does need some work. I tried, as an experiment, messing with curves, exposure, and selective color in CS2. turn down the highlights, and maybe explore the yellow sand's saturation and light levels. And yes, it's a bit tilted downward to the right.
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::CanoeGuru
05/28/08 11:01 PM GMT
According to the numerous great comments you've received, it sure doesn't seem like a flop! :) Don't listen to the c-index, it lies ;) First, you like it...that matters most. Secondly, many others who left good comments like it too!

I'll echo Rob's comment and agree it's definitely not a flop. But I find the colors to be realistic and already fairly vivid...I'm afraid that playing with it too much will make it look "fake".
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::marcaribe
05/28/08 11:20 PM GMT
Thanks so much for both of your imput.. The below average C-Index rating just made me wonder what are they seeing that I wasn't and wondered if there was a fatal flaw that I had over looked or too dopey to notice
Keep those great pic's coming!
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&purmusic
05/29/08 4:29 AM GMT
Tropical Seascape


General formula for linking:

<@ href="http://www.caedes.net">CAEDES</@>

Which would show as a link, once the @'s were changed to a's ... as simply this:

CAEDES ... linking to the front page according to the URL ... http://www.caedes.net



So, the 'linking formula' even more generalized:

<@ href="Insert the web page address from your browser ... here">Name the link whatever you wish ... one word, a sentence ... a whole paragraph, if you wish ... here</@>

1) Change nothing else ... not the spacing, don't eliminate the quote marks ... only sub in the information and then

2) change the @'s to the letter a ... in both instances.

The reason the @'s are there? If not, the site would convert it to an actual link and then you wouldn't be able to 'see behind the scenes'. So to speak.
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&purmusic
05/29/08 4:47 AM GMT
Oh, and by the way ... nice shot. :oD

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Ok, now some real thoughts. Albeit a condensed version of my usual ...

Forgive me here, everything seems a little tight within the frame. Perhaps even a slight shift in camera position to free up the boat in the water from the fronds(?) would go some ways in eliminating what I am picking up, feeling to an extent when viewing your photo.

Looks like the camera did the choosing on the focus? I am wondering what the impact would be if a better balance of clarity ... hmm, strike that ... sharpness of detail was struck between that of the foreground and then the background elements.

The one particular frond draws my eyes upwards. It really is quite a vivid element with respect to the rest of the photo. No slight intended ... just an observation.

Although it doesn't detract ... the white rail ... kind of expect that 'stuff' where a tropical image is concerned ... I am in agreement with your thoughts in your opening post to an extent.

Taking the above suggestion of shifting the camera some to the right ... and then perhaps relegating the flowers/blooms to the one side (left) of the frame of the photo and eliminating the rail might have opened the photo up some more.

Don't think the colours are problematic whatsoever. Rather pleasant and natural to my eyes. Slightly overexposed as a whole though with a slight ... slight, tilt in the horizon as mentioned.

Uhm, I did say it was a 'nice' photo didn't I?

Alright, not fair with the kidding around stuff. Mixes the message up. I think it is a good photo Diane. Some adjustments in camera position to address the framing ... taking more control of the manual features afforded you ... would easily elevate this one.

No, not a flop at all. :o)
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::LynEve
05/29/08 3:11 PM GMT
Kia Ora Diane :)
My 2 cents worth. I think the white rail most definitely detracts from the overall impact of the picture. I was not sure what it was until I read what you had said. I think the colours are very natural and the sunshine is casting a n*** - oops, sorry, very pleasing glow :)
I did a very quick clone out of the rail CLICK HERE to see it.
I used the measuring thingy in PSP (otherwise known as the straightening tool :) ) and the tilt is very miniscule. I could not detect it when I looked at the picture. Even with my glasses on :)

I would like to be there right now, it looks a lovely place.
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::Hottrockin
05/29/08 10:34 PM GMT
Nope, not a flop!! Nice shot!! If it's off horizontally it ain't by much and wouldn't affect it in the voting booth!! Me?? It's the people in the pic that throws it for me...I'm not really a people person and in general don't care to see people in pics...perhaps others come here to get-a-way from the daily norm of seeing and interacting with 'people'?!?! Yell at them and tell'em to get outta your shot, or, you could ask nicely...that works too. I like the overall thought process on the take. I hadn't looked at the c-index (who cares), but if I'd had this in the VB I'd give it a 6. That's just me, I'm tough in there!!
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Why do the pictures come out square when the lens is round?? Picture Purrrfect .
::marcaribe
05/30/08 4:40 PM GMT
Very Informative! amazing really every person who views a picture comes away with a slightly different impression. Which is wonderful, it would be a very boring if everyone saw something the exact same way.
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