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It's been a while

.Molybdenum
06/18/08 4:03 AM GMT
I've been away for a while. I just uploaded Iris.
Just wondering if my break has helped me improve at all.
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=Samatar
06/18/08 12:39 AM GMT
Overall I think it's quite well done. There are two things which I would suggest changing slightly; firstly I would have positioned the iris slightly more to the right, it's still a bit too close to the centre to my eye. Secondly, I don't think the background is blurred quite enough so the subject is still getting lost in the background a bit, perhaps the DOF could be a bit lower to blur the background a bit more. However IMO it is the best photos in your gallery so far, although I only had a quick look.
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.Molybdenum
06/18/08 8:59 PM GMT
Yea! That's what I like to hear :)
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