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please visit my gallery

.priyom
03/01/09 6:00 PM GMT
please visit my gallery and give an overall comment
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::rp64
03/02/09 3:08 AM GMT
May have been more approriate to post this to 'request for comment' but so be it. Keeping in mind that I am very much a novice myself I'll throw a few thoughts past you. Be careful of your exposure. tal gach, dew 2, and emergenc all seem quite overexposed on my monitor anyway. Conversely, tokta loses all detail in the underexposed shadows, and, to my eye anyay ghash goes from over exposed to under exposed as you move from right to left.

I love the composition on Ying yang, rickshaw, broken hope and bot gach. The control of the DOF on dew and fragile is very nicely done as is lojjaboti.

Over all? You Don't say how long you've been at this, what type of equipment you use, or how comfortable you with post editing programs. I would say your gallery shows a variety of fairly interesting pieces and you have a nice eye compositionally. A bit of fine tuning and care on afore mentioned exposure issues will go a long way.

I'll just mention that I've found the best way to get more comments on your own posts is to give more comments to others...just some unsolicited food for thought there.

Regards,

Rich
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=ppigeon
03/02/09 3:52 PM GMT
I moved this one in the 'Request for comment'
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-Pierre-
::LynEve
03/02/09 10:59 PM GMT
After viewing your gallery my overall comment is that I enjoyed it very much. You have an artistic talent with a delicate and subtle touch. Your range of images is refreshing and different - My favourites are 'Rain' and 'Forest of Sorrow'

Keep up the good work :)
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The question is not what you look at, but what you see ~ Marcel Proust
::LynEve
03/03/09 2:22 PM GMT
Your latest upload is very different and I hope it gets lots of view.
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The question is not what you look at, but what you see ~ Marcel Proust
&mimi
03/04/09 6:02 AM GMT
Hi Priyom....after viewing your gallery a couple of times now, I mus say I really like your illustrations. I am envious since I don't' draw :)
I love the tight focus on ~birth~ and ~pressing~Very unique presentations.
A couple of your nature shots ~tal gach~ and ~little delight~ could use a tighter focal point.
I liked ~dhan~ but on my monitor it was pretty dark but a good image.
I think overall you are doing good and keep on drawing or taking pictures or both and sharing them with us.

Have a beautiful day! :o)
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~mimi~

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