Very interesting approach and good contrast in colour between the red boards on the outside and the ones covering the windows. But I can't say I like the composition. In fact I think this photo is quite poorly composed. The lines of the windows and the building itself going into the distance are very strong, but they lead the eye in the wrong direction. The focus point of the composition falls way outside the frame to the right of the picture, making it a rather unpleasant experience to watch for more than a few seconds.
yeah, I can see where you're coming from with the focus point. The reson I shot it the way I did is because on the right edge on the photograph (just outside of view) is a nasty post for the porch above.
I agree it's not the best composition, perhaps it would look better shot the other direction, point where I'm standing. I'll give it a try next time I'm out there...