It certainly does have a "transformer" kind of look and appeal to it, and your black & white presentation enhances its mechanical and hard-edged character. Because I read a lot my mind and eye naturally travel from left to right, and the position of subject matter in my own photos is often influenced by that, with individual subjects placed in the center or slightly to left of center. Viewing submissions here at Caedes sometimes sparks odd observations for me, what I consider a plus. So I thank your sleeping monster--those slanted areas under the personnel railings do look like closed eyes. Do you suppose if the "garage door' was lifted we'd see teeth in there?
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-Nik