Experimenting with some candles, I had to stamp out one of my speakers in the background to make it all b&w. The candles were covered in dried flowers. Sorry if it's horrid, i'm a beginner. Constructive crit please :)
Nothin wrong with that. I'd prefer it to be in color. I like the little designs on the candles. The only thing I see in the way for improvement would be a little better focus. The two front candles are a little out of focus. Good post. Keep it up.
Pat
No need to apologise for this one. It’s very creative and comes over with simplistic charm. If it were mine I would clean up the lighter areas to the right of the candles and maybe give it a little sharpening. Otherwise it’s just about perfect.
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I agree that sharpening things up front right would probably help, otherwise I think this is pretty nice. Normally I don't like even numbers in a still life, because they're well...too even. You know ? But every rule is made to be broken & your placement of your candles keeps them from looking too regimental.
A great job on this Susan, beautifully done !