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Uploaded: 11/18/06 2:07 AM GMT
Headdress Peace
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Feel free to give suggestions or ask questions.
The problem I had with this was the face looking awkward/ too fuzzy. Or maybe it wasn't fuzzy enough. And obviously the center of interest was supposed to be the headdress but I can't figure out how to make it stand out more withhout making the rest of the image phony looking.
Anybody have any suggestions how to camouflage the errors in this photo?
**I have made a new version without the strange "space" above the face among other suggestions I like and will load it when I have access to my own computer.... Thanks for the suggestions!

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.bfrank
11/18/06 4:07 AM GMT
It is a striking image. Could use a little more tweeking on the hair thing. Just above her forehead there is a big oval thingy that needs a little something. I like the moodiness of this lady's face sort of looking down and dreamy. It's a good one.
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.Donna68
11/20/06 3:04 PM GMT
Its a lovely picture, It has a real dreamy quality that I love. Well done :-)
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malc_hall
11/20/06 5:10 PM GMT
I like the mood of the picture, and I think I see what your going for with the attention on the headdress rather then the face. If the face was sharp focus it would still make a good picture, but detract from the headdress. Maybe there's a little too much fuzz on the edge of the face around the nose, lips and chin? I like this enough to add to my favorites. Well done.
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.photog024
11/20/06 5:54 PM GMT
the expression on the face is very dreamy. i think you achieved that but you are right on the edge of blowing out her cheek and nose. your head dress as a focal point is non existent. if that was what you wanted to achieve... you failed. the softness in the model's face is beautiful. very feminine. the saturation gives a very artist-like feel.
all in all it is a very pretty picture.
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::sasraku
11/29/06 7:22 PM GMT
Moody photo, but I realy like what you have done to it.

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