In your light I learn how to love. In your beauty, how to make poems. You dance inside my chest, where no one sees you, but sometimes I do, and that sight becomes this art. ~Rumi~
Great composition - but it could have benefited from making the figures a bit smaller in the field - and not clipping the arm of the girl on the left. Putting the girls into the context of the field a bit more would make them even more child like- smaller - and cuter - at least in my opinion. But grandmothers want as much of their grand daughters as they can - so this image is a wonderful capture of your granddaughter and a great start on a wonderful composition.