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Downtown Lines
© Jay_Underwood
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Uploaded: 11/03/09 11:25 PM GMT
Downtown Lines
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Taken last Summer in Syracuse, N.Y. It may seem tilted but I wanted it that way to keep the building in the background straight. Gotta love the challenges of barrell distortion.
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.Jay_Underwood
11/03/09 11:27 PM GMT
Hopefully I wont get slammed for this one. I really dig the way it seems you're walking into it.
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I’m having amnesia and deja vu at the same time - I think I’ve forgotten this before.
The barreling is there but not intrusive.The shadows of the windows on that walkway almost appear 3 dimensional with the shadowy effect.I think that this would work even better if you had some deeper shadows and lighter highlights.It`s a little too monotone to me and needs a little work. Just my take..
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Fantastic shot. I don't think it needs work- I like it the way it is, but that's just my opinion. It's serene and desolate and all of the lines and shadows and tones are wonderful. Nicely done.
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A fantastic contest entry ... B & W is perfect. I agree the lined shadows do create a 3D effect & I like the textures too. Best of luck to you Jay.
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“There are many paths but only one journey.”
Nice job, Jay. Everything in here is a straight line of one sort or another! Love the b/w.
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“Life is precious; therefore, do not waste it by doing things mechanically without love. We should try to put love into everything we do.”
- Amma
Apologies for not commenting earlier, but I never put comments on fellow competitors images incase it sways others opinions. I liked the image and the starkness of the lines, and the way it drew me in, as you said, but somehow the composition did not work for me. Even now I cannot put my finger on why this is, it just seems wrong. Sorry I can't be more helpful. It isn't the barrelling.
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You are so good. I think your decisions were wise with this one. I'm glad I saw it! Makes for a very interesting DT.
It made my mind work...and the Goddess knows I need some heavy lifting there :)
Plus it's always nice to see Syracuse in its best light.
:)PJ
It made my mind work...and the Goddess knows I need some heavy lifting there :)
Plus it's always nice to see Syracuse in its best light.
:)PJ
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I'm loving the lines, the contrast, the b&w, textures, the whole creation is totally awesome. It would have been a real pleasure I imagine to come up with this. Nice work.Verena
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