Ok, changed my monitor's display setting.. namely, that of Colour Temperature from 9300K to 6500K ... and back.
Where both Colour Temperature settings are concerned.. text is light green. Kind of, sort of.. sage.
The 'cooler' setting of 9300K (and typically the default one for most monitors, unless changed by the user/owner) ... the text takes on some ... some, being the very operative word ... 'grey'.
Not sure which laptop/notebook you have.. however, am reminded of a few members that reported difficulties in using them for editing/post processing on the notes of colour.
So.. I wouldn't worry about the laptop/notebook display. And most certainly, keep to the desktop where post processing is concerned.
Personal preference? Caveat?
A tad less vignetting. As I am detecting some banding in that area.
So.. 'les's might be more on this facet.
Lovely clear and well-focused shot. And a very nice presentation on all creative accounts.