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Uploaded: 04/04/13 1:19 PM GMT
Waking Up
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One of my hardy little autumn flowering cyclamen waking up early one morning last week.
Editing done in PSP. I am not quite sure it is worked to advantage. I just felt like trying something different and welcome your opinions :)

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::tigger3
04/04/13 1:57 PM GMT
Lyn, It never hurts to experiment, I like the surrounding area around the flower, but not so sure about the flower itself, not sure if you could keep the focus, and clarity on the flower, and keep the experiment results around it? Tigs♥ =^..^=
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Nature in all her glory is my uplift on life and so is my love of photography. sandi ♪ ♫
::Ramad
04/04/13 5:59 PM GMT
A beautiful colour and a nice capture Lyn. The sun's caress has woken her up fully. No poem this time? I liked the previous ones.
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::trixxie17
04/04/13 9:58 PM GMT
I think I agree with Sandi on this one - I too like them surounding area and that effect there but would love to see the cyclamen in close detail.
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. . . "What a desolate place would be a world without a flower! It would be a face without a smile, a feast without a welcome." A.J. Balfour
::LakeMichigan
04/04/13 11:32 PM GMT
I also like the surrounding area better than the flower. I think I also prefer the previous one.
However they both have their merits and it is always good to try new things .
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.snapshooter87
04/05/13 2:51 AM GMT
I too like the surrounding detail but the flower is fine as the prime subject. It's a bit of too many distracting influences, Eve Removing the frame/border, a slight crop from the top as well, and a larger crop from the right border with some sharpening put's the flower in the best place with some added detail in the petals.
The flower is now the star attraction and the background blends perfectly with the star of the show.
The crop from the right border should go right through the middle of that round white (out of focus) petal.
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.tib
04/06/13 6:15 AM GMT
A very pretty flower Lyn! I like the effect that you've used! I love to see someone try something new and stretch out of their comfort zone a bit! Way to go my friend!!
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::SEFA
04/08/13 8:34 AM GMT
I like your postwork it makes the flower stand out. Very nice.
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::icedancer
04/09/13 6:35 PM GMT
Fantastic post work
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Have a Wonderful Spring
+animaniactoo
05/04/13 2:17 AM GMT
Lyn, does it make sense to say that the postwork doesn't go quite far enough? And if you could push it a bit farther, break it up more have more contrast and play as it blurs out into the surrounding area, it would create a beautiful contrast with the clarity of the flower?
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