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Uploaded: 05/26/07 7:37 PM GMT
Gracefully Floating On By 2
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Thanks to the constructive comments from 'ROPnam'(Paul),I've been back into Adobe and had a go at merging out that squareness of the frame on the original pic. I think it's worked with the editing...let me know what you think. Many thanks, everyone...Jacquie

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.timvdb
05/26/07 8:09 PM GMT
Hey Jacquie,

Surpassing my mind,
Surpassing Reality,
Surpassing my dreams,
Surpassing Beauty,
Surpassing my words,

But always,
Gracefully floating on by
---------------------♥

I like it a lot, wonderful reflections, nice framing,
I prefer this one over your previous,
And a lovely poem,
Beautifully done,

Thanks for sharing
Tim
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.twinkel
05/26/07 8:30 PM GMT
I like this one so much more because my eye is not leading to the frame any more but to the swan and that's the meaning of this picture, well done here:))
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::gerryp
05/26/07 8:38 PM GMT
Very nice Jacquie. A superb shot and presentation with this great poem...gerry
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.ROPnam
05/26/07 9:38 PM GMT
:)... Well this is a surprise... This time it worked perfect... great job. Sincerly now the mood of the shot it's better transmited... 4 me, if i see imperfections, i see distractions & this one has no imperfections now :D... Keep up the good work.

Paul
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Beauty is no quality in things themselves. It exists merely in the mind which contemplates them, and each mind perceives a different beauty.
.Catharina
05/26/07 10:35 PM GMT
I loved the first one already Jaquie,the frame didn't bother me at all, but this is very beautiful as well and I'll just take this one with me too thank you very much:))
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::cynlee
05/27/07 2:45 AM GMT
Nicely done.
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You will be led to the knowledge of the internal things which are invisible to you, by the external things which you see before you. . . . Even so then, we can represent to ourselves in thought the Author of all that is, by contemplating and admiring the (visible) things which He has made, and ever brings into being. - Hermes
.sahadk
05/27/07 3:02 AM GMT
Hi Jacquie,perfect one,fantastic
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.metpin777
05/27/07 5:43 AM GMT
Jacquie, yes a very graceful pic as she holds her head high...to show off her beauty...and such nice poetic writing to go with her

steven:)
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.mirloth
06/30/07 6:26 PM GMT
I like this much better than the first one. There's no competition now for focus - the larger swan, the muted color of the letters, the smoother fade - It all works together now to make something beautiful!
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