You will be led to the knowledge of the internal things which are invisible to you, by the external things which you see before you. . . . Even so then, we can represent to ourselves in thought the Author of all that is, by contemplating and admiring the (visible) things which He has made, and ever brings into being.
- Hermes
I like the minimalism in the first one but this one looks good too. It just looks a bit too busy for me. I would keep the design with the circles but take out the banner (with the "R"). It cut the design in two and make it less effective...