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Trapped Inside
© ShannonChristine
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Uploaded: 06/10/10 12:10 AM GMT
Trapped Inside
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I feel like I need to get time to go outside and take some photos...this photo tell that feeling really well. <3 enjoy!
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::LakeMichiganSunset
06/10/10 12:12 AM GMT
Very nice with the tree silhouette on the wall behind you...Fran
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Excellent presentation...Favs...
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"It goes on and on and on...it's Heaven and Hell..." - BLACK SABBATH Visit Jhihmoac's Gallery
Something different is always good. I like the tree shape and the combination of the moods. Nicely done. Verena
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Fear less, hope more; Eat less, chew more; Whine less, breathe more; Talk less, say more; Love more, and all good things will be yours.
this is pretty cool... i like the models' pose. nice job. i think you could have made this shot better with some lighting.
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Good shot & post-processing.
I agree that the lighting could be improved (think floor or table lamps). If you grayscale the image you can see that there's very little variation in light, and it's mostly midtones, except for the black dress.
Also, the model gets lost in everything around her - the door, the tree, the wall - which can easily be fixed by cropping the image. Try placing her against the right frame of the image, leaving a little room above her head (I would leave the left border as is). So basically, shrink the image down from the top and from the right. Example.
I agree that the lighting could be improved (think floor or table lamps). If you grayscale the image you can see that there's very little variation in light, and it's mostly midtones, except for the black dress.
Also, the model gets lost in everything around her - the door, the tree, the wall - which can easily be fixed by cropping the image. Try placing her against the right frame of the image, leaving a little room above her head (I would leave the left border as is). So basically, shrink the image down from the top and from the right. Example.
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For wisdom is protection just as money is protection. But the advantage of knowledge is that wisdom preserves the lives of its possessors.
I also agree about the lighting, I would leave the right wall as it is and work on the left border as with clone out the door and the floor (also in the right border), so the only thing that is left is the background with the silhouettes behind her to get a clean shot and I would crop it a bit to get a better balance in it.
I can't make an example for you , cause I am not on my own PC, otherwise I would make one.
But overall not a bad shot, mood is good and the pose of the model is good too :o)
I can't make an example for you , cause I am not on my own PC, otherwise I would make one.
But overall not a bad shot, mood is good and the pose of the model is good too :o)
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Carpe Diem!
To my eye, everything works very well together in this photo to bring about the mood you state in the narrative. The model is not lost in everything around her it is rather her consuming feelings that surround her. Fine work and just got a 10 in the VB from me.
Stan
Stan
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Thank you everyone for commmenting on the photo, i do see what you mean about the lighting and I'm truely greatful that you guys can help me grow as a photographer. I will really use this information in the future!
Stan-thanks for the comment as well-i do agree with you! and i do feel that the photo makes you feel like your more "trapped inside" Thank you for the wonderful 10 in the VB!
XO everyone!
Stan-thanks for the comment as well-i do agree with you! and i do feel that the photo makes you feel like your more "trapped inside" Thank you for the wonderful 10 in the VB!
XO everyone!
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Thank you! :) I want to shoot more outdoors stuff, but my job takes my life!
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