Precious!! Some grain exudes, yet, I kinda like it as it adds an old-world charm to the piece!! Perhaps a wee adjust in the gamma to enhance the B&W contrasts?? Keep'em coming as we always wanna see more!!
The choice of the B&W is absolutely gorgeous and give to your image a part of mystery. The only thing I can say that it miss a little bit of contrast. The highlights are too important in the hair of the little girl and on the face of the boy. DOF is excellent giving to this pic a third dimension. I like your image, for me it's a success.
RAPHAEL :)