I like the composition. The empty space on the lower right and the out of focus space in the upper left frames a nice diagonal well. The soft focus goes well with the soft white colors. The only thing I don't like is it seems the flower that is partially covered is in better focus than the foreground floweron the right...when you blow up the pic to full size this is more noticable....so I like this more as a smaller thumbnail. If you had added a stop or so through the aperture this might be just perfect.
The clarity is wonderful. Groups of small flowers always seem difficult to get all into focus at the same time. You could use a smaller aperature to get more of them in focus. Ilike the placement of the flowers in the frame.
I like the capture. If you are bothered by the composition mess around with cropping. :) I took the image and played with it a bit to see what was possible- there are some good options there. See what you come up with.
If you get stuck, then p.m. me and I'll send you what I came up with and see what you think.