"What other reason could there be to get up in the morning except to set ourselves free."
If my comment on your work ever seems to criticise, it does not. It is always so that we may learn together.
I do like the vertical lines, together with the dots and thingies it's giving me the feeling that I'm watching al old black&white movie, with the grainy images. I like that :)
The black..eh.. frame itself I'm not sure about. I like that it's not all black and has some lither parts, but I'm not sure what else I think of it.
I think you should just experiment more and see what comes of it.
Cheers.
Steb