I like the position of the tree. I wonder if the silhouette would be more effective if the sun was directly behind the trunk. Also the glare off of the roof is a bit distracting. I like the overall composition though. thanks for sharing.
Jonathan
Procrastination is just one more symptom and verification that we do not consider our moral state in the planning of our day to day activities.
-David Crowder
I think you had taken on quite a challenge here! The story is the palm leaves themselves and I actually like the repeptition of the narrow parallel lines in the roof. That said, I have a personal prejudice (not at all shared by other people on Caedes) against enjoying a blast of brightness in the center of my desktop...too distracting. I like your idea and I hope you do more studies along these lines...looking for symmetry and beauty in the simple things of nature.
"Life is short, break the rules, forgive quickly, kiss slowly, love truly, laugh uncontrollably, and never regret anything that made you smile" .... mygallery
Jonathan