Sorry, Frank.. some times I just can't help myself where typing out loud and constructive critiques are concerned.

What if..

You moved the umbrella to a position over the text of "Be Cool"?

Something like.. this.

^ This is a quick and dirty edit.. but, conveys my thoughts of taking the umbrella and placing it within frame for a more cohesive/creative presentation/conceptual piece.

As in, the umbrella is not simply there.. and somewhat disembodied.. rather, it is casting some shade on the text.. you know, keeping "Be Cool" cool.

That nonsense of mine aside..

Brought me in for a close look.. mission accomplished, I would say.. and did.

As I do like the graphical image you've created. And kudos to you for creating the glasses from scratch.. and.. for the judicious choice on the note of the font for your text.

And..

But, of course.. thank you for sharing your creativity with us. As I always enjoy when you veer off into this illustrative genre of art.

Makes sense and thanks for the advise Les.

Frank, this is perfect way to start summer, very cool! I did check out the link from Les, and see what he meant as well. Keep bringing the creative works of art. tigs=^..^=

Would you believe the moment I viewed your image, I felt cooler!...have you installed some sort of magic there? Very well done, love the colors, tones, and idea.

FUN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Bravo Frank and a well accepted take from Les. Good man sir:)