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Doorways into the Glass City
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The village has come to the city.
In the narrow street, in the crowd
pressing down it, in the faces of tall buildings
we plainly see the shimmer of poplars
in the emptiness of the plateau, the huddle
of houses from which the voices of families,
and tribes before them, rise, reaching across
the sharp ridges of their displacement
to settle like smoke in the deepest hollows
of the city. They are very near to us, in the store
or the next apartment, in the shadow of the tower
yet are heard as distance, as ignorance,
and, in their echoes, the city seems to shudder
like something imagined from very far away;
glass city for those without windows. Their shoes
sit at the doorways as if begging for admission.

"To the City" ~~ John Ash

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::0930_23
03/13/10 4:27 AM GMT
There are 8 million stories in the Naked City. This has been one of them Shads. It looks like Rear Window meets Naked City. If half of it was black and white it would really ring true. It almost has a fisheye effect to it. Good creation.

TicK

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Hopefully my photos and stories will let you know what makes me Tick
::verenabloo
03/13/10 5:15 AM GMT
The words "the city seems to shudder like something imagined from very far away--glass city for those without windows.Their shoes sit at the doorways as if begging for admission." now THOSE are words I wish I had written! How very fitting this writing from John Ash is! And this 'coloured' glass city you have created is a masterpiece John ! The colours are so explicit. There is almost a 3D effect here. You imagination has no bounds my friend! This is just magnificent. Thank you so much. Verena
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Fasten your seatbelts, it's gonna be a bumpy night! (Bette Davis)
::Dunstickin
03/13/10 7:46 AM GMT
Now that's a cool creation mister!.....Crackin stuff coming from a masters mind!...
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* Owing to the deterioration in my hands, I find that I cannot comment as much as I should..But please know...I do look at all your posts!..and will leave my 'moniker' >OB< when I do so!...Thank you all * OwdBob'sGallery
::biffobear
03/13/10 8:51 AM GMT
That's a real nice creation..But don't go throwing any stones..R.
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Light travels faster than sound. This is why some people appear bright until they speak
.Jhihmoac
03/13/10 11:47 AM GMT
Nice presentation...Favs
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"I'm a Pago-Christian...got a problem with that? Then take it up with the primary educator(s)!" - Visit Jhihmoac's Gallery
::Roseman_Stan
03/13/10 2:28 PM GMT
Not sure how you do it, but you do these very very well!

Stan
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“Won't you come into the garden? I would like my roses to see you” - Richard Brinsley Sheridan
::tigger3
03/13/10 3:02 PM GMT
Superb work once again John. Your on a creative roll. ♪ ♫ :)Sandi♪ =^..^=
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Nature in all her glory is my uplift on life and so is my love of photography. sandi ♪ ♫
.Logun7
03/13/10 3:24 PM GMT
»»-»»((*-:¦:-*))»»-»» Fantastic Work ««-««(( *-:¦:-*))»»-»»
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every day is a gift......that's why it's called the present!!
::jswgpb
03/13/10 3:41 PM GMT
I'd get lost. lol
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Always remember - Follow the Yellow Brick Road, it will lead you to OZ and the Emerald City. A very nice place to live. Trust me on this one, I live there. The Lion **** MY CAEDES GALLERY****Another Site I'm AT - MY DA HOME PAGE
.Jimbobedsel
03/13/10 3:56 PM GMT
Alfred Hitchcock and Rod Serling wrapped up in to one nightmare, only in color. Very creative, and well presented, John. The longer I look at this, the more I get the feeling the walls are closing in on me. I am going to have bad dreams tonight...I can tell.
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BUCKEYES BASKETBALL
::Ed1958
03/13/10 4:21 PM GMT
Lovely composition well managed.
Ed.
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::Inkeri
03/13/10 8:25 PM GMT
A Magnificent work and image,John..Kudos.Faved.
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::SEFA
03/13/10 11:22 PM GMT
Verena said it so well John, and I agree. It´s a wonderful creation with a strong 3D feel to it.
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.icedancer
03/14/10 1:18 AM GMT
Superb work John and love the depth of it and colours, you also write such wonderful narration
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.Joanie
03/14/10 1:22 AM GMT
Your manips are truly fascinating John!!! Cool work!
Joanie
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::100k_xle
03/14/10 7:19 PM GMT

Excellent post and title John.
Thanks for sharing your creative mind.

E J
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This Image GRABBED my EYE. That's Why I Stopped By. Thanks For Sharing ! Never argue with an idiot. They drag you down to their level and then beat you with experience
.ovar2008
03/14/10 8:37 PM GMT
What a fabulous image!.
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::tealeaves
03/15/10 4:26 AM GMT
Whoa! Fabulous art, my friend! I love the 3D effect that is so prominent here, along with the beveled panels and textures! Yep, definitely reminds me of a city with towering buildings! A perfect poem to accompany too! Kudos, John!! Faved.
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*Creativity is allowing yourself to make mistakes. Art is knowing which ones to keep. ~Scott Adams*
::fogz
03/15/10 10:46 PM GMT
You should put on an exhibition of your work John! You would put many art students to shame! love it!
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..thanking you in advance for your comments. Please know that all your comments are appreciated....." Live well, love much, laugh often!" .... mygallery
.KT11109
03/23/10 9:54 PM GMT
Nice and surreal. Fantastic work.
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