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Uploaded: 12/09/09 9:40 PM GMT
Footsteps in the fog
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After 2 wrong versions the one I wanted. I love Noir, it offers so much opportunity to try and capture a story in a single image, and the odd camera angles, the stark contrasts and lights really allow the imagination to wander. Does this picture tell a story? If so, what? Maybe not the obvious one. Criticisms of the image please, what is wrong, what does not work?

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::Ed1958
12/10/09 4:32 PM GMT
I now can recognize you stile in the VB.
That's another interesting angle.
Ed.
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Logun7
12/11/09 5:21 PM GMT
.·:*¨¨*:·.VERY.·:*¨¨*:·.GOOD.·:*¨¨*:·.JOB.·:*¨¨*:·.
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єvєrч dαч ís α gíft.....thαt ís whч ít ís cαllєd thє prєsєnt!
.lovestoned
12/12/09 9:08 AM GMT
I get a romance/horror/suspense feel with this one. Awesome. Into the faves!
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“The sudden disappointment of a hope leaves a scar which the ultimate fulfillment of that hope never entirely removes.” - Thomas Hardy
sirbentus
12/13/09 9:08 AM GMT
Hmmmm. Many questions come to mind - Is she looking at the man, or up at the terrace? Perhaps it's where he came from. Is he the father of the child she seems to be carrying? Is she afraid of him? I quite like the theme here, but I just can't seem to figure out the shadow on the building behind the woman though. Is it his, or hers? It's shape just doesn't seem to fit either character, and it seems out of place for the location of the lamp post as well. All in all, it is a good effort Imo.
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.HazyHairs
12/16/09 4:57 AM GMT
lovestoned sums it up pretty well "romance/horror/suspense". I also agree with sirbentus about the shadow on the building. Not sure about light source. Excellent B&W 3D art work though!
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=Samatar
01/31/10 12:24 AM GMT
My only criticism here is that it was more apparant to me that it was computer generated than your other noir image. I think the womans face gave it away for me.
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