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Stone and Metal
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Uploaded: 03/07/12 8:36 PM GMT
Stone and Metal
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WOW! this is a great shot! I love the contrast between the natural stone and the architecture but how also the siding on the building compliments the shape of the main rock
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What caught my eye was the reflection of light mirroring the shape of the rocks.
And then.. that of the natural versus man-made, or derivative materials used in the construction of the building.
And then.. the lines of the walkway/railing.
Exposure is good good, as is the colour.
Caveats?
In an effort to not assault you with another verbose, inane piece of rationalized constructive critique.. here is the picture worth the next thousand words:
"Stone and Metal" - Cropped
Changes the aspect ratio, however, by eliminating the furthest left-hand side reflection ... simplifies, brings more attention to the mirroring of shapes formed by the rocks and reflection.
And removes the brightest area of the rocks to the left, that was drawing my eyes at least.
Without the vertical pole in the upper right-hand side ... better and unarrested flow of the lines of the walkway's railing within frame.
And.. done.
... ...
Well, not quite yet.. as I quite like this one. And most certainly appreciate the eye to have seen and composed a compelling image from the setting.
And then.. that of the natural versus man-made, or derivative materials used in the construction of the building.
And then.. the lines of the walkway/railing.
Exposure is good good, as is the colour.
Caveats?
In an effort to not assault you with another verbose, inane piece of rationalized constructive critique.. here is the picture worth the next thousand words:
"Stone and Metal" - Cropped
Changes the aspect ratio, however, by eliminating the furthest left-hand side reflection ... simplifies, brings more attention to the mirroring of shapes formed by the rocks and reflection.
And removes the brightest area of the rocks to the left, that was drawing my eyes at least.
Without the vertical pole in the upper right-hand side ... better and unarrested flow of the lines of the walkway's railing within frame.
And.. done.
... ...
Well, not quite yet.. as I quite like this one. And most certainly appreciate the eye to have seen and composed a compelling image from the setting.
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Tom