I think you did a very good job of portraying the sensation and getting your message across. Most campaign pictures are of wrecked cars, but somehow this gets the message across even more. Well done.
Kat
Interesting effects! If I didn't read your explanation, I would have passed this photo by, because it is really dark, and the interesting areas are a little part of the large darkness. I think this would be really dramatic and effective as part of a graphic presentation, with text in the right places. I hope this makes an impact...