Usually I wish the artist would format his pictures into something that fits my monitor screen better... but here I can see that the narrow rectangular format has me looking up, as I would in Real Life. You might actually want to frame this in a "full screen" size, locating your pic at the top to reinforce that "look up there" idea. Re the focus problem, maybe you need a faster shutter speed.
Hmmm... I have to say I agree with narnianmermaid- the shot is out of focus a bit and I almost wish it were somewhat brighter. Not sure if you can do anything about that, but my guess is there is something in photoshop that will let you do that. Mess around with the RAW imaging if you can and see what comes out of it. But it is a good photo though :]
I think the idea behind this image was great, I just don't think it traslated well into a picture. The colors and focus seem melancholy to me while the 'birds in flight' theme feels more uplifting. But again; good idea.
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