What you may want to try is to replace the sky by the original photo. Problably a darker version. You see during the HDR process the software will apply a clarification to the whole photo and that ruins your sky.
So, to really make HDR work you should combine it with layers of the original photo's.
Still, it is a beautiful scene!
Paul
Not a bad pic as it has a lot of potential, but with the improvement, the majority of the beige - yellowish areas took a greener hue. It also gave the grass a somewhat florescent look.
I do like the way HDR held the dynamic range together, and this is a very nice composition. You may want to work on the colors, though -- not because you did anything wrong, but because there is a lot of green reflecting from all that white trim! So you either have to explain that to everyone that looks at this -- or preemptively take some of the (natural) greeen out of the trim, and/or back off the saturation a bit. Doesn't seem fair, does it! You're getting there! :)
So, to really make HDR work you should combine it with layers of the original photo's.
Still, it is a beautiful scene!
Paul