"Look deep into nature, and then you will understand everything better" - Albert Einstein ------------------------------------ -----------------------------------------------
By the way.... if I don't thank you by message or post, I doesn't mean I'm not truly grateful for your comments and suggestive insight in regards to my posts.......
Jarrod...hhhmmm...how to approach this...ok, froma techniceal aspect I am quite impressed with the clarity, thefocus and the use of light. The clors are interesting and the lines draw me deeper into the picture.
Having said that, the composition itself doesn't really do anything for me. I look at it and say "yep, it's a wall", and kind of get ready to move on. Not to say it's a bad post, one mans treasure, etc...
Techinical work - superb. Interest level - low. Sorry, buddy, just trying to be more honest in my critiques.
Great framing, good eye, so so pic, which from me is ok. My one wish is that the red line was exactly parallel to the border (although that would throw the vertical left border out but that) Maybe bend it with mesh warp? or something? The red metal bar is out of place too since it does not compliment the lines. Its very close to being a great pic though.
I like the colors and the angle and if I had MY wish list, I'd want a bit more red. Abstracts are hard...they strike people as either great or awful... and this one is coming to my computer and staying on my desktop for a while!