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Uploaded: 02/13/09 4:08 AM GMT
Unity (reworked)
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This is the final piece. I had quite a bit of work left to do so I may have posted a bit too soon. Anyways, I hope you all will find this more professional and cleaner. Nevertheless I do hope to hear your thoughts and suggestions on both compositions. I was seeking a grungy, cold, hard feel to this panorama (about 6 shots in this one) and I think this post better acheives that effect.

Thanks ahead of time for your suggestions!

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::cynlee
02/13/09 6:05 AM GMT
You sure did an amazing job of joining the six shots! This one is much brighter, but I'm not sure about the vignetting. Did you try doing it lighter? I definitely like your approach to this image. Lots of good work, Emily.
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::tigger3
02/13/09 11:50 AM GMT
You did a good job on the rework Emily. Here is the link to the first posting
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::Roseman_Stan
02/13/09 2:24 PM GMT
I honestly like the first one better. It is just more pleasing to my eyes and delivers the message so well. This one is okay but I think the blue tone overrides what the message of the photo is. You do some super work Emily.

Stan
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::crysophilax
02/13/09 6:31 PM GMT
I have to agree with stan about the blue tint, but everything else is better. If you want real grunge there is nothing better than B&W with some contrast. i still love the concept of a posed picture from behind, its as if the team are saying we are so good you are not worthy of our pictures.
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::nigelmoore
02/15/09 5:16 AM GMT
You got a grungy, hard feel to this but I agree with Chris above, a black and white version would be interesting. Personally I prefer this one because it's colder. I love the 'attitude' too, with backs to the camera.
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.leo2xl
02/16/09 2:19 PM GMT
Very nice pic Emily, I really like the rework. The atmosphere of the shot is fantastic. Great Pic!
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.Tomeast
02/16/09 11:42 PM GMT
They look like a tough bunch and ready to go. I like it this way, the cold blue tinge adds something.Great job doing the stitching as well.
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