Definately like the BW better than the colour one. This, as simple as the target seems to be, is very powerful. I call this kind of images inspiring, because they seem to start a story, instead of tell it from the beginning to the end.
Good job!
Check out the site "Between Truths", read, learn and pass on. The three steps is all you need to remember to get started. =)
http://www.freewebs.com/intween/