It looks pretty sparse and bleak. Was that the assignment? I love the off-set tactic, but the snow is pretty blown out, which is a no-no in b&w. Just out of curiosity, how did it end up green? My self-developed negatives always turn out purple, leaving yellow prints. Odd...

This is a great concept… I think it could be improved by moving the door about an inch or 2 to the right (if the building allows that). More detail in the snow would also improve this. Look forward to seeing more of your work 8•)

Try converting this to a negitive image

There is an overall green cast to this composition. I think it needs some color correction. I'm not sure how the title fits in. Shucks, maybe we all is being a little hard on you. Your only 17 and out here posting photos with the big folks so that says a lot for you as far as I am concerned. Keep at it. It's springtime now in Colorado. take a drive up into Rocky Mt Nat State Park. There is so much pretty scenery up there it almost jusmps in your camera without you having to do a thing. Looking forward to more posts.
Pat

i like the colors there and the place as well. thank you