This type of shot is always interesting...It does have a sense of drama.

Hmm well you felt that the photo had something because you posted it on here(!) but let me tell you..It is a great photograph but I squint when I look at it -much the same way as staring into sunlight. You def have an eye for photography and it also looks like you have a decent camera too. I wont give you an 'artists' critique as you are a newb ;) but what I can give is a welcome to Caedes! Keep up the good work
-keep sharing & looking for that 'special' image!
J

Nice shot that might be improved by correcting the 'tilt'

No, the exposure is all wrong. Toodark and it doesn't have any single point of interest. You might try shooting this under better lighting conditions.
Emera