If I may ... lowering the bloom within frame, such that the central portion is not on the midline horizontally ... might provide an assist on the visual dynamic front.
Good good that you offset it from the vertical midpoint, just think (in my humble opinion) you could add that lil' 'something something' extra with the above suggestion.
That nonsense of mine aside, wonderful colour and good clarity.
"There is always something waiting at the end of the road ... if you're not willing to see what it is ... you probably shouldn't be out there in the first place."
If I may ... lowering the bloom within frame, such that the central portion is not on the midline horizontally ... might provide an assist on the visual dynamic front.
Good good that you offset it from the vertical midpoint, just think (in my humble opinion) you could add that lil' 'something something' extra with the above suggestion.
That nonsense of mine aside, wonderful colour and good clarity.
Thanks for sharing this one with us. :o)