I like what you've done here, Rob. But sometimes your titles and narratives are quite verbose, long-winded, tedious, wordy, bombastic, circumlocutory, diffuse, flowery, full of air, fustian, gabby, garrulous, grandiloquent, involved, loquacious, magniloquent, palaverous, periphrastic, pleonastic, prolix, redundant, repeating, repetitious, repetitive, rhetorical, talkative, talky, tautological, tautologous, tedious and even tortuous.
I would have preferred the title "8:07". Other than that I think this image is true Robesque and a solid 8.9.