Hmm, not bad for a first, you deffinately have some talent. Its simple and thats good, but next time try maybe getting it zoomed in a bit, so the image fills its frame a little more. Onther than that kep trying. (might I ask what program you used?)
Hi Richard- I'm so glad to see you branching out and trying new things. This looks pretty good for your first.Just keep practicing and you'll get the hang of it. Very pretty colors you've chosen for this too.