I quite like the colours here, but the sublect looses me a little. maybe it is the fact that it was taken in the car. However to say all that, you have set the shot up quite well. It is well positioned, but a little dark. Thanks for sharing it.
i agree with the others. maybe it was shot through glass or you just have too much noise. it comes across as a bit out of focus. i always have the problems you see here so i know what it looks like. correct noise and you will be far more clear.