Well it is an interesting shot, I feel that is lacking a focus point and some consistency on the repetition of the palm leafs. Although; I like that you took something as simple as a cieling and a moving fan to make this.
I also enjoyed the tones of the pictures they are just right for the subject and composition. I honestly have mixed feeling about this picture, but over all I like it.
Seems like if I didn't know what I was looking at..I wouldn't know what I was looking at..lol. I like the colors..makes me feel like I spacing out. although I do agree it is lacking something that draws ur attention.
It has a nice feel to it though.
as mentioned above, i do feel 'Security' has no real area of focus, but i think that's prefectly fine for a desktop mage anyway. i like the hue of the picture and the simplicity.
good job =]
Altogether this image is too dark and gloomy for my liking. It needs some sort of colour fizz to add some grunt to it. However, I do like the subtle textures and I'm beginning to like the additon of the fan.
Some more experimentation with lighting with this shot could give you some awesome shadows. Good luck.
Expirimenting with lighting could be fun, but I think you misunderstand the subject. It was the roof of a restuarant that I ate in. No means or time to set up lighting systems or anything of the like. I will keep your suggestion in mind for when I have some real gear, but this was the best I could come up with. :-)
I also enjoyed the tones of the pictures they are just right for the subject and composition. I honestly have mixed feeling about this picture, but over all I like it.