...and an interesting one! I like the angle you have chosen to get the complete lock in veiw. If your camera flash will allow exposure compensation, tune in down a couple and reshoot to avoid the bright areas. You could also put a diffuser over the front of the flash to spread out the light. Interesting subject:-)

The composition here is excellent, Bill. Darryl has pretty much already mentioned the only advice I'd give. Again, a great shot.