Caedes

  Right Outside the Rings  

Click here to view at full resolution.
Uploaded: 09/25/05 11:02 PM GMT
Right Outside the Rings
Views: 5902
Dlds: 2549
Status: active

I'm not entirely happy with this one. It's missing something/needs something fixed, but I can't quite put my finger on what it is. Please give me some suggestions.

Comments

Post a Comment  -  Subscribe to this discussion
*caedes
09/25/05 11:05 PM GMT
The purple planet looks flat to me. How are you generating it? If you want to make sure that you get the sphere look accurate I'd suggest using a 3D modeling program like Bryce or 3D studio to render a nice sphere with correct lighting and the surface texture already applied. Then import it into the scene.

I really like what you're doing with this idea. Keep it up.
0∈ [?]
-caedes
SilverFang
09/25/05 11:14 PM GMT
Yes, I also like what you're doing with this idea! The colors here are very nice, the planet does seem a little flat but not too bad, nice work catching the sunset for the original shot. nice work!
0∈ [?]
-SilverFang
EmilyH
09/25/05 11:39 PM GMT
I like the colors. Hmmm...maybe something in the upper right hand corner, like a comet or a moon?

0∈ [?]
::verenabloo
09/26/05 3:45 AM GMT
I think the planet is a bit "too much" in this colour..maybe a pale yellow or a muted pale blue...etc etc...and the stars are great..but if yu do them, maybe yu ought to think more about the moon with them somehow. I love the fiery orange..so I think the whole thing ought to be a bit more "fiery"...maybe reds?
0∈ [?]
A woman is like a teabag...you never know how strong she is till she gets in hot water !!
razorjack51
09/30/05 1:25 AM GMT
Hmmm, nice image, I like the whole look and feel of it, but if it were me I think I'd rather see the planet in the background. It might need to be on a slightly smaller scale but that way you could show a fuller view of it, not just partial. It also needs some texture, and as Verena said I believe a fiery orange color would look rather nice. Also, where is the moon in this pic, it needs a moon, if only a small one.
0∈ [?]
"Knowledge speaks, but wisdom listens." - Jimi Hendrix --- My Gallery
+Samatar
10/16/05 4:26 AM GMT
Sounds like everyone has different ideas about this one... I have two suggestions: Firstly, you do need to make the sphere look more 3 dimensional as caedes says, give it more depth. Secondly, the trees in the photograph look rather plain and "every day" in comparison to the exotic scene in the sky. Perhaps a desert or a futuristic looking city would fit in better.
0∈ [?]
-Everyone is entitled to my opinion- Visit the new improved rescope.com.au
dreamingaqua
10/19/05 7:57 AM GMT
i think it's entirely lovely, great job!
0∈ [?]
.buttersweet
08/03/06 5:03 PM GMT
yuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
0∈ [?]
buttersweet
CrimsonDragon
04/10/08 3:31 PM GMT
I like it a lot and am using it as my background now. Perhaps a very small moon, dime sized on the screen, or two would be in order in the upper right, and more 3-Dness. I disagree on making the whole thing fiery or changing the scenery though. The colors blend from red to purple to blue progressing from the horizon to planet to sky, which I find nice. The scenery gives the sense of familiarity which I think is an essential part of this image.
0∈ [?]

Leave a comment (registration required):

Subject: