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  Not busy now; Run down River  

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Uploaded: 09/22/09 4:34 AM GMT
Not busy now; Run down River
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nearly empty river bed with trickling tiny waterfalls.

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.kmgranier116
09/24/09 3:30 PM GMT
I like the way the light reflects off the water, however, I think the picture could use a little more color. Everything sort of blends in together.
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.snapshooter87
09/25/09 1:52 AM GMT
Your idea is good, Marissa. It could use a bit of sharpen and contrast to separate the tones better. Those are minor items. It could have used more river bottom in the top area to enlarge the space with even fewer items, to accentuate more desolation.
The eye travels from the lower right to the upper left, and a bit more mud /sand is needed to allow the eye to complete it's elliptical travel back to the lead-in point and start all over again.
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.dgthomas
09/25/09 2:15 PM GMT
This reminds me of the place my son (when he was 5 years old) and I would play with little toy dinosaurs! Welcome to Caedes, I look forward to seeing more of your photos!!
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::verenabloo
09/26/09 9:52 AM GMT
I like the idea, and of course, the colour of the water and the sand is very good. Welcome to caedes, and I also look forward to more of your photos. Verena
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"Hope" is the thing with feathers-- That perches in the soul-- And sings the tune without the words-- And never stops--at all-- Emily Dickenson

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