I like the black and white that you chose for this image. The objects in the foreground would make a nice compostion. All the other items that are around the foreground images are a bit distracting. The partial glass seen on the right side either needs to be in the image or out....I find my eyes wandering around looking for the focal point. You do have good clarity here. Looking forward to seeing more still life's from you. Thanks for posting this one :~!)

i Agree with mimi, a few less objects would make the focal point more clearer. Although i like the idea behind this photo.

I disagree.

This is a beautifully composed piece, question? For still life are you meant to change the subject matter? "NO" lets look @ what is on show here, really very good clarity and tonal depth for a start if I had a 21st I was going to it would make a fantastic card. I would be tempted to colour the liquid in the glass as a flash point for the piece. I like the fact that the table number was in a frame and as a consequence reflective in nature.

Im sure you had a good time as it looks really well put together.

Quality 9/10 for me. Nik ;-)

I really enjoy the B&W effect in this picture. This seems like a classic photo. Good job in this shot.