Aw, very cute. Beautiful drawing, the framing was a very nice touch, nice rework!

I remember this and love it still. I kinda feel if you had a think black line at the beginning of the cream coloured frame(nearest the horses I mean) it would bring out the black drawing a bit more Or maybe just replace the white inner line with a black one....I love this drawing, its so sweet and so beautifully done..verena

I remember the original also. I like what you have done with the frame..especially the texture of the frame matching the textures of the horses. I agree with Verena. I think replacing the white line with a thin black line would draw the whole image together more. As it is now, the frame sort of just fades away and the viewer's eye is drawn toward the center. You are doing a lot of good things with this creation. Keep up the good work :~)

Very good!
grat

Very nice..but i'd have to agree with those above.. either a black line, or (my own suggestion) make the frame a darker color (like navy blue or hunter green or maroon) any, in my opinion would look amazing on this

Thanks for the suggestions everyone! I'll definately try some of these ideas.

Lovely sketch. I searched for your original just to compare the difference. Remarkable. I like the added frame. I agree that a darker color would look marvolus on this image. Nice work with what i assume to be charcoal. Keep up the lovely work.

I love this. I looked at the Original, and its very pretty too. But i like the frame on this one! Very Good!

This one shows you got eye for positioning and apparent dimensionality. Really a good one!
Kudos!

This is very nice...perhaps a little more work on the front flank of the colt.