I like the effect you created here. The edging made of lights is a nice touch, and the reflection in the water is lovely. I think from my limited experience that it might be improved by having the waterline at the 1/3 point instead of the 5/8 point. I've also found (though lord knows I've tried it enough) that photo manipulations aren't popular here in the desktop wallpaper community. You can see in my gallery what I'm saying.
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