Hey Mizzy,
Great close-up, I definitely love the lightning,
You could try to do something about the light reflections in your eyes,

Thanks a lot for sharing your portrait
Tim

the shadow in the bottom left corner is a bit distracting, at least for me. it was an original attempt though, using the red filter... thanks for sharing :)

Great idea Mizzy. One thing that really would make even more impact is crop tightly in on the eye. I like how you subject is staring up.