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Japanese Sunset on Copper 2.0
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This is the creative patch for "Japanese Sunset on Copper". User testing revealed some issues with the image presentation of the initial release.

Some of the fixes included in this patch are:

1) Cleaner lines on the fractal itself.

2) Updated the central portion to that of a much more fuller and complete graphic (stronger focal point) and in turn, filling the inner frame more so.

3) Overall colour scheme/palette is more cohesive now.

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..//.\\. Fractal created in Apophysis 7x15c. Free vector art (Japanese landscape) from freepik. Copper finish background created in Photoshop. .//.\\..

..//.\\. Feel free to share your thoughts and opinions on the two versions, time and opportunity permitting. .//.\\..

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::Ramad
09/09/16 5:03 PM GMT
This hits you really in the eye on full screen Les. Wonderful work!
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.rozem061
09/09/16 5:21 PM GMT
What is happened to you Les ? Are you out of your mind ?..(LOL)
I don't like the dark diagonal head line and even so the dark
corners as well !
What a pity !
I think you'll understand that I like the first one(1.0)
much better !

John

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::corngrowth
09/09/16 5:24 PM GMT
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Thanks for this advice Les, but the tiny word 'may' makes that I'll ignore your advice this time, lol.

Like Raj said above, this 'patch' has struck me. Wonderful work indeed! Well done!

Good Luck with it in the Diagonal contest.
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::tigger3
09/09/16 5:47 PM GMT
I like both but this one really grabbed my attention even more, bravo Les! tigs=^..^=
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::jerseygurl
09/09/16 6:06 PM GMT
I like both images Les - so original and creative - I don't know how you do it but I do know it's stellar imagery!!!!!!!!!
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.icedancer
09/09/16 6:07 PM GMT
Oh my Les, I just love all those curving lines which I'd call diagonal - Gorgeous colours and entry - Good Luck my friend
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VIEWED IN FULL
::trixxie17
09/09/16 7:10 PM GMT
Really like this one with the wonderful Japanese wood-cut background - a fave for me.
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+purmusic
09/09/16 11:00 PM GMT
Had a creative scratch that needed scratching, with respect to the first version. So.. I really appreciate you all taking the time to view and comment on this second version.


@John; aka rozem061

Need you really ask?

"My psychiatrist told me I was crazy and I said I want a second opinion. He said okay, you're ugly too."

;o)
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.Tomeast
09/09/16 11:06 PM GMT
My comments on the first were with this version in mind. This fantastic background works so much better with the center piece. Can`t put my finger on what it was but the center was too strong and my eye wanted to stay on it , unlike this.
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::Constance52347
09/10/16 12:09 AM GMT
I like the shading and clarity on this one better.
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+purmusic
09/10/16 12:30 AM GMT
Thank you, Connie and Tom, for taking the time to share your thoughts and in providing some feedback for me.

Very muchly appreciated. :o)
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::gr8fulted
09/10/16 6:26 PM GMT
I could look at this for an hour and still not be done. Excellent job!
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+purmusic
09/11/16 12:10 AM GMT
Thanks, Ted.

Appreciate you taking the time to view and comment. The kind appraisal is a bonus.
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.mesmerized
09/12/16 4:53 PM GMT
Like this one much better...kind of suggestive, even seductive...or is that just how my mind works, lol...very creative, original, and intriguing to view...good luck in the contest, Les.
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+purmusic
09/12/16 11:03 PM GMT
Thanks, Pat.

Appreciate you taking the time to view both pieces and comment. The feedback is indeed appreciated. :o)
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.artytoit
09/15/16 1:06 PM GMT
Ahhh, you live!!! I like the wood look - very different. Now PM me an update, got stuff to tell you :D
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.artytoit
09/15/16 1:11 PM GMT
Oooops, I meant 'copper', lol. Definitely better than the original.
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+purmusic
09/15/16 4:07 PM GMT
Hey hey Paul,

Good good to 'see' you. Will play catch up soon.

And thanks for taking the time to view and share your thoughts. Muchly appreciated. :o)
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.twinkel
11/23/16 2:43 PM GMT
chuckles....Looks like a tattoo on a bum with a sticker on it to cover the blunder of the tattoo artist.

I like the first one...Japanese Sunset on Copper...so much more.

But very creative of you :o)
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+purmusic
11/24/16 6:13 PM GMT
"chuckles....Looks like a tattoo on a bum with a sticker on it to cover the blunder of the tattoo artist."

Lol.. ok, then.

But.. I do appreciate that you took the time to view.. ahem.. both of my 'creative blunders', twinkel.

;o)


Thank you.. sincerely.
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