I like this - very interesting idea behind this. I think the half-shown face and the repeating of the colours in the eye is very good and nicely done. I like the idea of the swirls of colour but think that they might be better done if there was more wispyness, with different degrees of transparency and a sense of the swirls surrounding the person, rather than seeming somewhat disconnected as they do here. The swirls seem more real than the person, which doesn't seem quite right. I'd like a more dreamy, misty and mysterious feel from this.
It's still very nice work, though. Interesting, nicely done and a bit different.
Seeing things that cannot be seen.
Visions surround me, and then take hold.
Swirls of colors are shown.
Suddenly my senses are keen.
Now the real world seems so very cold.
~Shay
(I tried to post this in my description, but the format gets all screwed up) :(