I was focusing on this flower trying to adjust some settings on my camera when I realized, "Wow, that would be a neat shot!". Not exactly sure what kind of flower it is, lol. But I hope you enjoy :)
I like what you were going for with this, but like ::denised it doesn't completely work for me. Perhaps getting even closer to the flower and lowering the camera angle justa bit more to pull in some of the yellow in the background for some nice contrast. Just a thought, but I like the flowers and I too am amazed by how accidents can sometimes turn out to be great.